Character Sketches

Mary Deal — Tue, 21 Jul 2026 20:03:54 -0400

Character Sketches is an article I wrote about building great characters. Read more articles as I post about writing improvement on my Write Any Genre website.

Character Sketches

How to bring your characters to life.

Assuming you’ve chosen your POV, you will already be thinking about your characters. True, too, you may have been thinking about your characters before choosing your POV. The two go hand in hand, or word-for-word.

In order to flesh out your characters and give them ample zing, it’s a good idea to make lists of attributes for each player in the plot. However thorough, you must then write your scenes to fit each character. That is, each scene that you write when a character appears in the story should reveal what you planned for him or her when you made your list, and how you planned for them to act.

Of course, as the story develops, any character may take on a different persona than you first imagined. That’s not a problem. Amending the original sketch will suffice, keeping in mind how the new character image affects all the other characters and the plot overall.

I’ve always been interested in how characters are set up in stories. It’s no longer good enough to list features and visuals in paragraph or outline form, which seems like we’re looking at a person from head to toe and describing what we see. That’s vital, but characters do something while they act out who they are. Sometimes one thing they do can set up the reader’s impression of them for the entire story.

The List

Here’s my list of traits for the character Randy Osborne from The Ka:

Highly educated

Physical anthropologist

Works with biochemistry and genetics

Mama’s boy

Totally insecure

Sneaky

Secretive

Jealous

Always eating

Overweight

Short brown hair, greasy and matted

Wrinkled clothing

Kind of short

Embarrassing to be around

Obnoxious, to cover insecurities

Opinionated

Not very well liked

Dislikes Chione (the protagonist)

Thorn in everyone’s side

After you make your list, the next practice that will prove immensely productive would be to write a paragraph or two incorporating those characteristics. Then the first time each character shows up in the plot, you’ll be able to incorporate some of the qualities or lack thereof that you’ve assigned to them.

You do not need to use all the attributes in one paragraph when the character makes his or her entrance.

Simply use their habits and traits soon as possible to help round out that personality. If the story goes too far along without clueing your reader as to what they can expect from each character, those characters will seem flat or unimportant.

Randy’s Character Sketch

From the completed novel:

“Everyone looked to Randy, who stood supported with a hand on the back of a chair, flagging a leg back and forth as if his underwear might be caught in the wrong place. Then he lifted the leg a couple of times in a last-ditch effort to end his discomfort. His personal habits were reason for a good snicker among the tight knit team, who could politely ridicule one another, then laugh. At times, criticism from any of them seemed all in jest, a way this group of high-strung colleagues dealt with stress.

“At other times, Randy’s behavior was repulsive. He seemed to take great pleasure in eating all the time and, thanks to his mother packing his lunch, he always had an ample supply nearby to pick at. His continual weight gain and lack of personal hygiene turned people off. He always looked sweaty and wrinkled, with matted hair. No one relished the idea of sharing a tent with him in the heat of the desert. Finally, he reached behind himself and gave the seat of his pants a tug. Not the kind of professional posture one would expect from a Physical Anthropologist who worked with genetics and biochemistry.”

The Similarities

This is similar to the paragraphs I wrote soon after making the list of attributes for Randy, and after just two rewrites of bits of description from the rough draft. When I got to the first part in the story where I needed to show him in action and give the reader the full blast of what they could expect from him, I was shocked to find I had already written what I needed!

These paragraphs appear as soon as Randy ridiculously makes a big issue of something early in the story. After that, we know full well what to expect from him as the story proceeds.

Readers know that all characters go through what is called a character arc which is more fully explained in another article. That’s when the character starts out as one persona and then changes to another by the end of the story. Sort of like the good-guy-gone-bad or vice-versa. Randy goes through a shocking metamorphosis but, well…. I’ll leave that for another article.

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Progress in So Many Ways

Mary Deal — Sat, 25 Jul 2026 00:00:00 +0000

When an event knocks you on your heels, do you give in and stay down? Or do you get up, regardless of the struggle, and move on? In 2025, out of the blue, I learned I had cancer. I had surgery and went through a barrage of chemotherapy. I don't say this for pity - that's not my way. However, due to the many doctor's appointments, tests and therapies, my work fell behind over the course of a year. Now I am CANCER FREE and moving on. I needed to do something to make myself feel accomplished.

One day in May, I sat down to make some notes and Surprise! a whole new book began pouring out of my mind. That is a small book but finished and edited within weeks, and now accepted by my publisher. I feel jazzed having accomplished this. Regardless what happens in my life, with my health, I will keep writing. By the way, I am also an oil painter and photographer. All this fell behind, but now I am also back at my easel and have resumed processing my photography for my online galleries. No matter what sets us back a bit, we must keep going. It's the best way to feel positive about ourselves and affect healing.

I like to encourage others who struggle. So, what setbacks have you experienced, and how have you managed since?

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New Book Coming Soon

Mary Deal — Sat, 25 Jul 2026 00:00:00 +0000

My latest book was accepted by my publisher in mid-June 2026. I have not yet seen the book block to proof nor the cover art. Therefore I am hesitant to say the title and genre. However, soon as I can I will be posting that information, with the synopsis or some excerpts. This is my 14th book of 17, with three out of print. Each new book is a new smile wrinkle on my face!

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